Category: Writing

Homework – redraft of classwork 8th October

I was currently in the worst lesson of the day listening to my teacher my Mr Aveen telling us a story about how one day he helped this old lady home I thought to my self”wasn’t theirs lesson meant to be about science” right where sir said this Is the good pat I just blanked out and went in my own world.

For some strange reason I was imaging what was to happen if I died, what the teachers reactions would be the sad faces of my class mates, my parents crying and babbling on about how I was such a great boy, I even imagined that the local news came to my funeral and was reporting it worldwide, the shocked face all across the world.

The guy that I was sitting next to handed me a note and said open it obviously I opened it to find it saying “if you open this you are a cock riding twat” I straight away said “ahh this must be for Zoe” as I got to hand her the note she refuses to take it then Mr storyteller sees the note In my hand and says “you know what happens if u Have a note please can u read it out” I was panicking thinking to myself what should I do, luckily time was on my side and as soon as I stood up the bell went.

Classwork Notes 6th October

Juxtapose-familiar with unfamiliar

Push contrasting ideas together

-location we know but

military related

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soldiers, missiles

➡️ developed/heightened terror threat

Notes from lesson

In the beginning the writing is is red lipstick

On the tv in the airport it shows a Paris bombing

She has a bad attitude

The boy I 14 and he’s been driving since he was 6

It looks like he has been living in his car

When she gets of the plane she’s wearing sun glasses this could mean that she want to be somewhere sunny.

So there I was waiting for my one of distant cousin,Which I’ve never seen before but I have heard of her. When she walks up to me she say my names not Elizabeth its daisy now,