Homework – redraft of classwork 8th October

October 30, 2014 / / 1 Comment

I was currently in the worst lesson of the day listening to my teacher my Mr Aveen telling us a story about how one day he helped this old lady home I thought to my self”wasn’t theirs lesson meant to be about science” right where sir said this Is the good pat I just blanked out and went in my own world.

For some strange reason I was imaging what was to happen if I died, what the teachers reactions would be the sad faces of my class mates, my parents crying and babbling on about how I was such a great boy, I even imagined that the local news came to my funeral and was reporting it worldwide, the shocked face all across the world.

The guy that I was sitting next to handed me a note and said open it obviously I opened it to find it saying “if you open this you are a cock riding twat” I straight away said “ahh this must be for Zoe” as I got to hand her the note she refuses to take it then Mr storyteller sees the note In my hand and says “you know what happens if u Have a note please can u read it out” I was panicking thinking to myself what should I do, luckily time was on my side and as soon as I stood up the bell went.

Homework 8th October

October 29, 2014 / / 1 Comment

It was a cold dark night and I was trapped in an abandoned warehouse, I found a key and a card on a table in one of the rooms, so I started to think to myself”what are these for”. I turned on my phone to see if I could get any signal, nothing. The rain on the steel roof sounded like a fish creating bubbles. The wind making the trees hit against the side of the warehouse sounded like a snapping turtle. As I go into one of the offices I find a car magazine from 1998. Moreover I stated wondering why there was a massive box of magnets, this warehouse must be a movie set because there is a load of props e.g. A massive dinosaur.  The sky started turning lighter, it was almost the morning.

Classwork Notes 6th October

October 29, 2014 / / 0 Comments

Juxtapose-familiar with unfamiliar

Push contrasting ideas together

-location we know but

military related

⬇️

soldiers, missiles

➡️ developed/heightened terror threat

Notes from lesson

In the beginning the writing is is red lipstick

On the tv in the airport it shows a Paris bombing

She has a bad attitude

The boy I 14 and he’s been driving since he was 6

It looks like he has been living in his car

When she gets of the plane she’s wearing sun glasses this could mean that she want to be somewhere sunny.

So there I was waiting for my one of distant cousin,Which I’ve never seen before but I have heard of her. When she walks up to me she say my names not Elizabeth its daisy now,

This is Your Online Domain

May 26, 2014 / / 0 Comments

Hello and welcome to your personal online journal.

Edutronic has been created to enhance and enrich your learning at the London Nautical School. Its purpose is to provide you with an audience for your work (or work-in-progress) and you have the choice (by altering the ‘visibility’ of your posts) of whether your work on here is visible to the world, or only to your teacher.

Anything you post here in the public domain represents you and thus it’s important that you take care with that decision, but don’t be afraid to publish your work – as the feedback you may get from people at home, your peers and people from around the internet is only likely to enhance it.

Remember you can always access your class blog and all manner of resources through the Edutronic main website – and by all means check out the sites of your peers to see what they’re getting up to as well.

If you have any questions for your teacher, an excellent way to get an answer is to create a new private post on this journal. Your teachers are am notified of any new posts and will reply swiftly to any queries.

Make the most of, and enjoy this new freedom in your English learning!

May 25, 2014

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